Monday, February 9, 2009

Titanic (change)

Many people watched and read the Titanic story, but how much did people understand? This story background had many miserable events. There are three main parts to this story: the history of Titanic, the story of romance and the miracle which never happened.
First, the Titanic was a large ship that sailed from England to New York. After the ship sunk in the ocean. Some people went to the deep ocean to find a lost diamond. An old woman appeared because she was on the ship. She told them about the story of Titanic.
Second, she told them a then fell romantic story happened on the Titanic. A poor guy met a pretty, rich girl on the ship then fell in love. The guy knew the girl would get married to a rich guy. But the poor guy wanted to show his love to the girl and then he drew a picture of her.
Finally, at the time the Titanic crashed a iceberg. This is an emergency . Many people escaped onto small boats then many people died in the ocean. Without any help the couple knew they could not survive together, so he let her go.
In conclusion, this real story many people died. The girl that was still alive told them about this romantic story. She could not see the guy again so she threw the diamond into the ocean.

Thursday, February 5, 2009

Titanic

Many people watched and read the Titanic story, but how much did people understand? In the this story background had many miserable events. I have three main parts for this story: history of Titanic, the story of romantic and miracle never happen.
First, Titanic was a large ship from England to New York, after the ship sunk in the ocean. Some people went the deep ocean to find the lost diamond. A old woman appear because she was in the ship. She told them about the story of Titanic.
Second, she told them romantic story happened in Titanic. A poor guy met a pretty rich girl on the ship than fall in love. The guy know the girl will get marry with a rich guy. But the poor guy wanted to show his love to the girl then he draw a picture of her.
That the time the Titanic crash a iceberg. It is a emergency event. Many people escape on to small boats then many died in the ocean. Without any help they knew they could not survive together, so he let her go.
In conclusion, this real story many people died. The girl still alive that she told them about this romantic story. She could not see the gut again that she throw the diamond into the ocean.

Monday, February 2, 2009

coffee shop (change)

The coffee shop can be a place for social activity. In the coffee shop you can see different types of people, such as students, professors and co-workers. People go there to drink, eat, study, chat and relax. You can smell the coffee and the smell of bakery. In the famous coffee shop, you not only drink coffee and eat cookie, but also talk with other people. Also, you can search on Internet. This is a perfect place to play computer because the coffee shop will play music during the day. A coffee shop is a good place to catch up with friends, a good place to study, a good place to relax, and overall a coffee shop is the place to be.

Monday, January 26, 2009

coffee shp

In the coffee shop you can see different types of people like business people, students, working people, etc. People go there not just to enjoy the coffee or cake, but also to study, to have a business meeting, and to have a place to relax. You can sit anywhere you want as long as you keep your voice down. In the coffee shop, you can see people talking, drinking coffee, and eating cup cakes. You can smell the coffee and the bakery. A coffee shop is a good place to catch up with friends, a good place to study, a good place to relax, and overall a coffee shop is the place to be.

Thursday, September 18, 2008